Friday, September 18, 2009

modestness is so beautiful

in the long chinese history, modestness has played an indispensabal part.in chinese people'eyes, modestness is so beautiful. the modestness is to the people what perfume is to the flowers. the meaning of modestness in chinese is honor, a attitude of life and a way to calm their restless with anxiety.chinese like hide their successful and conservative.they think that modest men is the most successful one. as a chinese proverb, modesty helps one go forward, whereas conceit makes one lag behind.
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4 comments:

  1. Miranda MaSeptember 18, 2009 at 10:02 AM

    Can any one tell me what's the problem of this paragraph? - Miranda

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  2. New American GospelSeptember 18, 2009 at 11:23 AM

    Spacing between sentences and also capitalizing the beginning of sentences. Also incorrect transitions on some sentences

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  3. Jack BauerSeptember 19, 2009 at 11:05 PM

    Topic is interesting, but there are also grammatical mistakes and transactions as New American Gospel said above. It's a little bit difficult to read yours.

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  4. LostAsianKingSeptember 20, 2009 at 3:58 PM

    the topic is really interesting.however, it is to shot that i cannot really understand what modestness is beautiful

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