peer review

hi! i like peer review because it gives chance to know other people's idea. i use to do lot of peer review when i was in the CESL. i learn a lot from peer review. peer review is helpfull for me because i can know other people's writing styles, mistkes , good points and negetive point too. it gives idea to make our essay strong. of course we also learn english vocabilary. in the peer review, i would like to discuss section with partner. it is good to discuss about our essay because we cannot find our mistake than other. we also able to know good sides about our essay. for example: my partner told me you have good imagination about your topics. you used personal expiriances too. it makes your essay strong and more intersting. he also told me my "hook" gives more ideas about topics. i think, i would like to focus on thesis statment and concultion paregraph. every person has differnt ideas about all the topics. if i have to rate peer review expiriance i would like to give 5/5 score. peer review also helps to improve reading skills and speaking skills. i really enjoy peer review activity. i hope, we can do more peer review which helps to improve writing skill.

face surgery

hi! people are spending millions of dollar to looks beautiful or handsame. today, plastic suregry is the one of source to extime beauty practice. plastic suregry isthe another name of changeing your body, skin, bone etc. face suregry is the one of popular around the world. you can chnge your skin color, mouth, nose, etc. you could be become more handsome or beautiful. as we know, everybody want to have nice body and face too. plastic suegry can help to improve your persanality. movie stars are using plasic suregry to give different look of their body. i believe, plastic suregry is most successful extrime beauty practic then others beauty practic. it gives very fast result then others prctice too.

success

hi! success is the important for all of us. Success comes to to think different than other or doing different than others. There are number f quality require to become success. First, success is another name of hard work and persistence even we pass difficult time. Successful people never do different things, but they do things differently. We can go back our history it proves that success comes to any age. It requires strong desire, hard-work and having ambition. For example, thomas Alva Edition who find electric bulb. He failed 1000 times, but in a end he get success. so, failure is the simply opportunity to start with more inteligancy. succes makes you famous around the world.